Ah, Navratri. It’s that time of the year again when lakhs of students and workers take leaves and travel back to their hometowns for the festivities. It is of special importantce in East India, particularly in Bengal, and my town being in close proximity, we are no exception.
It was the October of 2013 and I had a ten day leave from college for Navratri and Dashehra so I decided to visit home. Most of the travel was hitch free but the last leg of it was where the trouble began. After 45 hours of travel, I descended the train at the nearest railway station from my hometown (about 40 km) at 4:15 AM with two trolley bags and one backpack. Since my father did not send anyone to get me and I didn’t want to hire a taxi, I decided to take a bus. (Not the one in the picture)
With both of my hands pulling the trolley bags behind me, I got out of the station and on the main highway. There I saw a bus which looked decent by Indian standards. I went up to it and paid the conductor for a ticket. I asked, “Which seat number?” “Sit wherever you want” was the answer. I thought that was odd but didn’t think much about it. Thankfully I got an empty seat, put my luggage in the overhead bin and sat, waiting for the journey to start. When the bus didn’t start moving even after 20 minutes, I got uncomfortable. It was just then when someone came up the aisle and mentioned, “This bus isn’t in working condition, please get in the bus parked immediately behind.”
Have you ever been in a stampede? At that moment, I felt like I was. Everyone was running and skipping over other people to be the first person out of this bus and the first person to grab a seat in the next one. If I didn’t have to retrieve my luggage, I would have ran and seat in the rear parked bus too, but I couldn’t and when I finally got there dragging my baggage, all the seats were full. I was quite furious and the bus conductor heard a mouthful from me and many other now standing passengers.
Anyway, the bus started to move. Thankfully, the road on that route is a paved one so we didn’t get many jerks. It was all nice and slow until the bus stopped only after a few minutes. At that moment, I thought maybe someone has to pee and hence asked for the bus to stop so he could, but the cynic in me feared something worse. Slowly, I started shifting towards the door of the bus (with my luggage of course). After an atrocious wait of another few minutes, the conductor announced that the engine of the bus has overheated (At 5:45 AM on an autumn morning, can you imagine?) and that another bus is on its way to pick us up.
Now I was at an advantage over the seated people. As soon as the new bus arrived, I jumped out of the door and sprinted faster than Bolt towards the next bus. I finally got a seat. A lot of others didn’t, including women and children, but I couldn’t care less at that point. I already was exhausted after two days of traveling and two instances running from one bus to another with two heavy bags and I was not giving my seat up for anyone.
A journey which should have been for 45-50 minutes had already clocked over two hours and I hadn’t even reached my destination yet. I called up my father to let him know that I’ll be late and to ask him to come to the bus stop to pick me up. The skullcap wearing gentleman who was seated beside me overheard my conversation and said, “Oh, you’re going to *my destination* too? Can you give me a lift?” I just looked him dead in the eye and said no. Because no means no right?
Finally, after an excruciating two and a half hours, I reached home and had a glorious vacation with the only blight being the dreaded bus journey. Needless to say, I haven’t traveled in a bus on that route again. Either my father used to send someone to retrieve me, or I hired a cab myself. Here, this is the type of vehicle I normally hire on that route:
Ever since that experience, I have been a comfort seeking, high spending brat when it comes to travelling.
This is my first time writing a personal experience. Tell me what you think and how I can improve. Don’t hold back on the criticism.
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Most of the time conductors in India are very rude. They behave as if we are asking for their help. We are not getting the service of what we pay. Nice way of expression
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True. They forget that they’re providing the “service” and not the other way round.
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You don’t have a comment section.
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You have to go to the site.. at the last of every post you will find a comment section. You have to click on the post first. Thank you.
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Yeah, sorry. The comment section wasn’t visible on mobile but on a desktop computer it is. Maybe a bug with my app I guess.
Anyway I’ll check out your blog when I get time.
Do you have anything to say about this post of mine or did you just come here to promote your own blog?
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I like what you write. Your creativity comes live through your posts. That’s why I follow you.
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Thanks. You’ve really flattered me.
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Pleasure is all mine. Keep up the good work.
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Shining Gem you’ve described the journey pretty well!! I can imagine why you would prefer to spend a bit more for a more comfortable ride!! 🙂
Check out my post for a similar bus experience…
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Haha thanks for understanding. Sure, I’ll check your post out.
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Well described.. !! Even I have gone through the same experience many times. Public transport is main issue in India. Drivers and conductors need to educate first regarding how to provide services. And ofcourse many people also need to educate how to use the services.
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True. Plus proper servicing of the vehicles is necessary to avoid breakdowns in the middle of a trip. Also, more number of vehicles and/or better frequency will ensure reduction of workload.
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Yess..basic problems need so solve than thinking of bullet train or digital India.
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Haha those aren’t necessarily bad ideas. I don’t understand why everyone thinks that we should focus on one thing only. I mean we could simultaneously do both.
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I know they are not bad. But till now our government has history that they left one thing behind and start over new thing. That’s why..
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Yes, your point of view is perfectly valid, but we have got to remain optimistic and hope.
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It sounds like you a had a bit of an adventure there. Have a nice weekend!
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Hehe, I did, though not a pleasant one I’m afraid. Thanks, you have a wonderful weekend too. 🙂
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Thank you! Very interesting estory.
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Oh wow, I would so rather take that Jeep any day! That bus ride sounds horrific!
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It indeed was. I love my open jeeps and would prefer a ride in them even on winter mornings as opposed to such claustrophobia inducing closed buses.
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You write beautifully! I had a similar bus experience in Sri Lanka… not one I’d ever repeat 😉
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No one in their right mind would. Thanks for reading. 🙂
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Hey hi, I nominated you for most versatile blogger award..check my post about it.
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I can so understand the thoughts that went behind writing this post…awesome read☺
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Actually this is a true story.
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Thereby making this a more relatable experience.
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True. True. Actually this was my first time writing in full length about a personal experience so I was worried if it’d come across as coherent or not. Since it felt relatable, I can say that I am satisfied with this. Thanks for reading. 🙂
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The pleasure is all mine😀
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Don’t public transport systems have some level of upkeep on their vehicles? I’ve had my fair share of delays on public transport, especially when I really needed to be somewhere, but thankfully there were other ways to get there (sometimes still using public transport). But your experience sounds like a pretty horrendous, especially with your baggage…
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To be honest, it wasn’t a state sponsored vehicle, it was privately owned. IT’s just that the purpose of the bus was public transport that’s why I used the word public.
Now as you know, private players always cut corners here and there to maximize profits and they don’t care for customer experience as long as they can fill the seats (and sneak in a few standing passengers too such as myself).
Thankfully, I wasn’t in a hurry to get anywhere, so I just kind of didn’t care about the whole ordeal and quickly forgot about it for the time being.
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Terrific experience man..🙊
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More like terrible experience.
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You write really well 😄
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Thanks. I’m flattered.
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#truth
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I travel in public transport for one and a half hour everyday to college. The journey has not been entirely pleasing. Sometimes men take advantage of the crowd. The only breather is that you get to see all sorts of people in the bus and gives me ample time to write poems (if I get seat).
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Aren’t the front seats of the bus reserved for women where you live? Anyway it’s just sad what women go through almost every day. At least you managed to spin something positive out of it.
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There are ladies seats. But sometimes while coming back you won’t get seats. Most of the times you do.
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Yeah I know how the early to late evening rush is. Luckily I didn’t have to take buses while I was in college since I had a motorcycle.
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You should write more about personal experiences.
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Oh my life is pretty boring to write about. 😀
But I will if I remember something interesting.
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I almost forgot, Happy Navaratri😄
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Wish you the same Aparna. 🙂
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In my country, you can be stuck in a traffic for 2-6 hours a day. 😂 I thought it’s just only my country you can experience that kind of stuff.
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Hehe, not really. Anyway our countries mustn’t be very far apart, we seem to be from the same geographical area.
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#Stampede, ha ha. Very nice
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Thanks Ananya. 🙂
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Nice one and I want to ask you where do you live?
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This happened in Jharkhand, where I presently live. What about you?
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I’m from UP
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Oh nice. Where in UP?
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Varanasi
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I enjoyed the journalized feel of the writing!
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Thank you OM, just went with the flow.
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Loved the way you wrote this! And it made me visualize it as I read. That sounds like a nightmare to me. My anxiety would have been so high! I dont think I would be able to be on a bus. Its so small around here, so I drive…thats irritating enough sometimes lol! 😃😃
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Consider yourself lucky you don’t have to go through such things in your country. Driving your own vehicle is the best.
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I hope your future transportation is better! 🙂
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My sympathy for comfort seeking brat😋?let me tell u about mine.I need to travel occasionally and that is just for one hour.The first thing I look for is a seat.If it’s full ,i wait for the other one.But the bus journey is a me time which I really enjoy by getting lost listening music and lookin out of the window.But there are some creepy male passengers who sometimes ruin it ,who can’t keep themselves under control Cz of which I have to choose the seat very cautiously like the co passenger should be female.If it’s two seater I go for window seat with a female co passenger to stay safe from the ones standing in the passage and the other seat if it’s male. “abla naari”😕
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Uh okay.. Not sure how to respond to that. 🙄
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Ya.i have become used to the fact that it can happen anywhere , though everytym, such incident leave me traumatized.The society will not change all at once but cz we will be the future parents , i hope our sons make it a better place.
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Yes. Yes. I hope your son doesn’t harass my daughter. 😀 😛
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Hahaha..awsm!! Will make sure of that😂😂
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That was quite a long and memorable trip and so relatable. Been there, especially scrambling for seats near the window and waiting for the bus to roll into a place that had decent toilets. Your post sent me down my memory lane.
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I hope I didn’t trigger any traumatizing memories. 😀
Although as a guy “decent toilets” are the least of my concerns as I can go anywhere.
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Haha! Aren’t you lucky ! My favourite memories are actually of the boisterous vendors who sell everything from magical elixirs to almost real gold chains. Their sales pitch is quite astounding.
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😂 😂 😂. I’m with you on being a comfort seeking brat while traveling. Ain’t nothing wrong on that.
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Haha, especially true if living in India. Even the most basic of needs sound like luxury here.
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True that 👍
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All I can think of is poor you! I would have read the signs and asked for a refund !!! Keep that in mind if ever there is a next time!
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Couldn’t ask for a refund. The seller of the ticket doesn’t travel with us (the conductor does but he doesn’t sell the tickets). Sellers are unique to each bus stand and get a cut of the money for selling as many as possible. If I were to ask for a refund from someone else (say, the conductor) he’d say, go and ask for a refund from the guy who sold you the ticket.
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In other words you would get the run around… 😦 gotcha
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Great description! I was there going through it too ! 😂
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Thanks. That was the aim. Wanted to make the reader FEEL MY PAIN! 😀
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Lol
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What an experience! Well worth a post!
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You seem to forget that “WHEN EVER YOU THINK SOMETHING WILL NOT HAPPEN, SOMETHING DEFINITELY WILL HAPPEN ” this is my experience in life
Probably the same would have happened in others life also. pl. collect your reminisce.
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how did you like my comment., No comments from ‘the shining gem.
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I like the fact that you contributed to my blog through a wonderful comment, so I liked it. 🙂
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you have followed the principle ‘BETTER LATE THAN NEVER’. Hope u have taken my comments in a lightervein. By the by Did you happen to read any of my post Under” REVELUTIONS ACROSS MINDS” if u find time pl go Theo and let me have comments. Good day.
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Of course it’s all in good humour. I’ll be sure to check your post out. 🙂
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Thanks for the reply.
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With so many people offering commentis what amazes me is how do you keep track of the comments and reply immediately makes me wonder. surely you must be possessing a magic wand or won’t be sleeping at all.
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Why yes I do have a magic wand. 😀
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again you made me wonder with your stunning reply. may I know your real name. if u don’t mind.
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You can call me SG.
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that’s not a correct way of avoiding my question. what is your real name and what place you live in. I am interested because you commented on my comments and as quick as quicksilver. tell me how u keep a good track of comments etc.
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That sounds threatening. 🙄
To answer your question, I have the WordPress app and I reply to comments as and when I get notifications on the phone.
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OK AS YOU PLEASE
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are you satisfied now, I don’t bother you, because I don’t want to see u sad. hope there are no I’ll feelings. what gutted Me was when you said, ‘ THAT SOUNDS THREATINING’.
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Relax my man. No hard feelings. I just don’t want to reveal my name on this blog yet. If ever you want to refer to me, you can call me SG.
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OK I don’t want to put pressure on any thing. pl be cool and when ever you feel like letting know your name you can do so. thanks.
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A hilarious and captivating narration. I could imagine how exasperated you were- through your very well written story. It was a good read. Thanks for sharing- author.
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Very very nicely written, as if I was with you facing all this…. Very well done…Of course be the brat ditch the damn bus.. Jeeps I love it too
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I know right. Ever since then I’ve been taking a jeep/bolero or my own car whenever possible.
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Sahi hai
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Good, simple and neat. Feelings are good to read. Writers make it colorful and interesting. All the best.
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That was hilarious and I can relate. I think almost everyone who has ever traveled probably can! Cheers! 🙂
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I have been in a stampede, a tornado and an earthquake and the stampede was the most frightening.
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Hi,
1. I love the gem in your header.
2. I know Yelling Rosa.
3. Congratulations on building such an engaged community.
4. I tried to congratulate you for winning the Mystery Bloggers Award but comments were closed.
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1. Thanks.
2. I’m sorry, I can’t recall Yelling Rosa. Elaborate please?
3. Thank you again.
4. Yeah, I did that to avoid spam.
5. I’d definitely check your new blog out.
Thank you for visiting my blog and thank you for commenting. Hope you stick around. 🙂
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I have some horror travel stories of mine own, Shining Gem….yours was well told. Enjoyed seeing the jeep in India.
~Mike
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Oh yeah the Jeep is a timeless classic.
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Buses with luggage is a BAD idea! Cabs or if walkable distance, I’d use my two good legs to take me there but not busses when carrying luggage
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That’s my motto now after this experience.
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Of course it depends on which state too…here in Goa where I live, it isn’t so bad but still I’d prefer to avoid a bus travel
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Pls. visit me on http://www.theextraaamile.com. that’s where I blog from now
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SENSATIONAL! Not a single effort of yours will go in vain. You will be rewarded for your pain. Your hard work will bring you a lot of gains. Very Meaningful Loved it
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What?
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I mean, I liked your blog style and I appreciate the effort you invest to put feeling in your content.
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Nice story and in the end it ended with a happy end 🙂
Thanks, dear friend
All the best
Didi
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Thanks Sister.
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A small correction, dear friend – I am a man 🙂
I know that Didi also means elder sister in India, but also in Europe we use Didi for expample for names like: Dietrich, Dieter etc.
All the best to you
Didi
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Oh I’m sorry, I was thrown off by the word Didi. So you’re not from India?
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No, I am from Finland, Europe, but I do travel at least once a year to India to help with the project Kirpal Sagar that my Master Sant Kirpal Singh Ji has foundet with the help of Dr. Harbhajan Singh and his wife Surinder Kaur. This place is meant for the whole mankind and all religions are peacefully under one roof there. Poor and needy people are helped there too and there is Kirpal Sagar Academy with more than students, there is a farm that gives food enough for people living in Kirpal Sagar and also those ones who come to celebrations (Bhandaras) to get food free of charge too, Furthermore, there is a hospital where needy people can get free operations and treatment too. Besides there are many more social arrangements too. This place is also called Manav Kendra (place of man-making) – and indeed the seeker of the truth will find everything that is necessary there to develop his soul and his spirituality (Man know thyself)
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Thank you, dear friend
All the best
Didi
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Oh that’s good. Keep up the good work my brother! May the blessings of Lord Kripal Sagar always be upon you.
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Thank you very much, dear sister 🙂
May you be blessed too by my Master
All good wishes
Didi
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Well just like you, I too am a man. 😀
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Now I have to smile 🙂 sorry for this too 🙂
Ok, dear brother – then wishing you all the best
Didi
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Thank You!
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… more than 600 students…
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